phoenixapprentice's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Asriel]

Oh cool! I didn't even know there WAS a 'solo instrument' category. Hmm ... now I'll have to make a song like this!
I agree with the last person who reviewed, it does seem like a few of the notes run into each other here and there. This is really cool though!

BECAUSEMETOO responds:

yus yus yus i kinda did it deliberately it's what The Beatles used super often in their melodies, i said about this in the review of the track you did with your dad, here i kinda just got intensely sad and pushed too many things. it's a character from a very dear to me story and i kinda just...
alone.too.

[Midnight Magenta]

Cool song! My suggestions to improve it: you could add a little more background noise, just little things here and there to make it more interesting. Maybe add a stronger bass, although I can't be sure that's what's missing because my headphones don't do bass well! And from 1:52--2:08 you might want to push that violin thingy to the background a little bit more so it doesn't conflict with the piano melody. Unless you want the violin thing to be the melody, in which case move the piano back. Anyway good job!

me-the-Guy responds:

Good advice! I might work on this song even more! Thank you

[[GDBH] -3-]

Awesome stuff! Love the melody!

blackhole666 responds:

thx :D

[The World]

Cool stuff! This is a very unique track!

Svord responds:

Ey thank you man

[Hexagon and On]

Wow that was a wild ride! This is soooo cool! How do you even make a track that's 8 minutes long? I lose focus when my tracks start to get to 4 minutes long haha. Great job!!

Zanzlanz responds:

Aaah thank you so much!!

It was actually very difficult to make it 8 minutes long, especially when keeping it energetic and dynamic the whole way through. But I promised myself to make this track within 3 weeks, and I just kept on going! :D
4 minutes is impressive! Normally I lose focus after making a minute or two these days haha.

[[GDBH] -i am lost-]

Wow, this is so cool! Love that drum beat. What synthesizers do you use?

blackhole666 responds:

thx :)

[Internal Heat-HanZ Music (also on YouTube)]

Cool stuff! In my opinion there could have been a stronger bass - but that could just be the fault of my earbuds which don't do well with bass at all. Good job!

TheHanz responds:

Thx man, I do agree that the bass should have been stronger, but the software I use doesn't really allow me to change that. That's why I'm trying to save up for a good program to still make original music with better quality and sound.

[Electroconductor - Escape (∀malgamation Remake)]

Great song! Sounds like it'd be good in a video game.

Skiddle responds:

Thanks a lot!

[Astrocreep: Invasion - Main Title (Invasion)]

Never heard of the game, but cool stuff!

ElectricEyeland responds:

Thanks! :)
You can play the game here: gamejolt.com/games/astrocreep-invasion/221071

[Sleeping In The Rain]

Awesome! Cool drums, I wasn't expecting them! BTW What program do you use to make music?

me-the-Guy responds:

Thanks! It's the only song I really tried in. And yeah, I use mixcraft 8 right now.