phoenixapprentice's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Radiance]

Great stuff!! The ending leaves a little something to be desired, but this is still way cool!

[HATE MACHINE (60% SPOOKIER)]

I feel like I'm walking through like an abandoned underground facility and there are dancing robot ghosts ... or something haha. Sounds like it would be cool in a video game! Neat stuff!

[Bad Time Night Five]

I dunno the title just really seems to fit with this ... even though this is a bouncy and upbeat song the title just contrasts beautifully. Haha I just pay attention to titles a lot sorry I'll get to the actual music. This song is cool! It has an aesthetic and feel to it that I can't quite describe ... and it's awesome! Good job!

BECAUSEMETOO responds:

OOOOOOOOOOOOOH THUNK YOU!!!!
(surprisingly i wrote it in like 10 minutes and it it's the most viewed thing for some reason, don't even know why, it's went like this - okay let's take 4 chords on just whip the melody without any idea on how it should be)
also maybe 3 references in the name and description helped >...<

[Bad Time 404 (I can't count too! x_x)]

Cool stuff! A nice and trance-y song that sounds very unique. Although I agree - might wanna rein in that reverb. I really like this because it's like fast-paced and yet has a dreamy sound to it. Nice!

BECAUSEMETOO responds:

yuuuuup i haven't touched that reverb knob while i was writing all four tracks :/
i need to be more minimalistic about it, i agree, sounds are really simple actually , you can have them too it's a free synth called - T-Force Alpha you can download it anywhere on the inturnets!

[Making An Announcement Too 3]

I really like the dark sound of the song and I really like the beginning because it seems a little more melodic than the rest of the song (although I think techno music doesn't focus on melodies? So I'm probably in the wrong place for that :o). The mastering could use some work, it does sound muddy (I could redirect you to a website to help with mastering if you PM me). I don't know what 0-30 seconds or 30-60 means so I hope this review works for you!

BECAUSEMETOO responds:

oooooh yah mastering kinda jumped out halfway through making this one, i kinda did a challenge to write 4 things in one evening again, so definetely i gotta know more about mastering, ima gonna pm da heck auta yooou!
redirect me senseiii!!! :3

[Asriel]

Oh cool! I didn't even know there WAS a 'solo instrument' category. Hmm ... now I'll have to make a song like this!
I agree with the last person who reviewed, it does seem like a few of the notes run into each other here and there. This is really cool though!

BECAUSEMETOO responds:

yus yus yus i kinda did it deliberately it's what The Beatles used super often in their melodies, i said about this in the review of the track you did with your dad, here i kinda just got intensely sad and pushed too many things. it's a character from a very dear to me story and i kinda just...
alone.too.

[Midnight Magenta]

Cool song! My suggestions to improve it: you could add a little more background noise, just little things here and there to make it more interesting. Maybe add a stronger bass, although I can't be sure that's what's missing because my headphones don't do bass well! And from 1:52--2:08 you might want to push that violin thingy to the background a little bit more so it doesn't conflict with the piano melody. Unless you want the violin thing to be the melody, in which case move the piano back. Anyway good job!

me-the-Guy responds:

Good advice! I might work on this song even more! Thank you

[[GDBH] -3-]

Awesome stuff! Love the melody!

blackhole666 responds:

thx :D

[Alien Dinosaur Party]

Not gonna lie, that title brought me here. Cool song, cool beat! I really liked the part at 2:39 with the piano-y instrument!

[The World]

Cool stuff! This is a very unique track!

Svord responds:

Ey thank you man